jargen: there are groups if you are part of the group it is inclusive and if you are not then its exclusive
Latin american dance
rumba: basic, new york, spot turn, karadja, hand to hand, swivel
cha cha: basic, time step, new york, spot turn, cuban break, double cuban break, swivel
samba: basic, whisk
jive
bachata
salsa
merenge
Tuesday, 12 January 2016
Thursday, 7 January 2016
For the first time since I realized that Teddy was gone, too, I feel something unclench. I feel myself breathe. I know that Gramps can't be that late-inning pinch hitter I'd hoped for. He won't unplug my breathing tube or overdoes me with morphine or anything like that. But this is the first time today that anyone has acknowledged what I have lost. I know that the social worker warned Gran and Gramps not to upset me, but Gramps's recognition, and the permission he just offered me--it feels like a gift .Gramps doesn't leave me. He slumps back into the chair. It's quiet now. So quiet you can almost hear other people's dreams. So quiet that you can almost hear me tell Gramps, 'Thank you.
Alanysis:
Tone-
Alanysis:
Tone-
Tuesday, 8 December 2015
10 things i hate about you
I hate the way you talk to me
And the way you cut your hair
I hate the way you drive my car
I hate it when you stare
I hate your big dumb combat boots
And the way you read my mind
I hate you so much that it makes me sick
It even makes me rhyme
I hate the way you're always right
I hate it when you lie
I hate it when you make me laugh
Even worse when you make me cry
I hate the way you're not around
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all
I hate the way you're not around. In poems, rhyming is not the only thing that matters. You also have to make sure that the meter and the rhythm is on point to make it good and to get and keep the reader's attention. In this poem the writer usually uses 3x4 I ams then breaks it with 1x3 I Ams.
For exmple here;
"I hate the way you talk to me -4 I am
And the way you cut your hair -4 I am
I hate the way you drive my car- 4 I am
I hate it when you stare "-3 I am
So here it uses keeps it the same for 3 times then at the end of the paragraph it breaks the rhythm. This is good because it makes a change and makes it more dramatic and more catchy. The meter helps make the message more powerful.
I hate the way you're not around
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
In a poem the way you say it is also and important thing so you have to make sure that the you say it with the right tone. Changing the tone also makes it more interesting because if you keep it the same then it becomes boring. In this poem the tone first angry then it becomes sad and she strats crying. ''
I hate the way you talk to me'':So first she list things she hates about the person who she is talking about and her tone is angry but then it becomes sad and the end she starts crying and she admits that she doesn"t hate him ''
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all''
I hate the way you talk to me
And the way you cut your hair
I hate the way you drive my car
I hate it when you stare
I hate your big dumb combat boots
And the way you read my mind
I hate you so much that it makes me sick
It even makes me rhyme
I hate the way you're always right
I hate it when you lie
I hate it when you make me laugh
Even worse when you make me cry
I hate the way you're not around
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all
I hate the way you're not around. In poems, rhyming is not the only thing that matters. You also have to make sure that the meter and the rhythm is on point to make it good and to get and keep the reader's attention. In this poem the writer usually uses 3x4 I ams then breaks it with 1x3 I Ams.
For exmple here;
"I hate the way you talk to me -4 I am
And the way you cut your hair -4 I am
I hate the way you drive my car- 4 I am
I hate it when you stare "-3 I am
So here it uses keeps it the same for 3 times then at the end of the paragraph it breaks the rhythm. This is good because it makes a change and makes it more dramatic and more catchy. The meter helps make the message more powerful.
I hate the way you're not around
And the fact that you didn't call
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
In a poem the way you say it is also and important thing so you have to make sure that the you say it with the right tone. Changing the tone also makes it more interesting because if you keep it the same then it becomes boring. In this poem the tone first angry then it becomes sad and she strats crying. ''
I hate the way you talk to me'':So first she list things she hates about the person who she is talking about and her tone is angry but then it becomes sad and the end she starts crying and she admits that she doesn"t hate him ''
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all''
Sunday, 8 November 2015
What is hook?
It introduces the paragraph
Carhes the reader's attention
A quote from the story
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
It's the first part you write
Introduction then hook
After introduction and thesis and the examples
Which if these would be a good hook?
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Cuddlely and cute..
I love dogs.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5- more
What is introduction?
Tells you what the paragraph is going to be about.
Sums up the whole paragraph.
Proves your thesis.
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you wrote it?
After thesis
It's the last thing you write
After the hook
Which of these would be a good introduction?
The writer used the word 'fabulous' to describe the girl's voice.
Dogs are cute.
Descriptive language is used when the writer wants to describe somethinh very clearly.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What is thesis?
It tells you what the paragraph is about.
It probev the point.
It tells a fact.
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
It's the first thing you write
After introduction
It's the last thing you write
Which if these would be a good thesis.
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Soft and yummy
I love dogs.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What are examples?
They are used to introduce the paragraph
They are used to sum uo the paragraph
It's used to prove your thesis
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
After introduction and thesis
At the end
It's the first thing you write.
Which of these would be good examples?
Dogs are dtaying home with their owners and the cats are always away.
I love cats
Dogs are better than cats
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What is explaniation?
It proves that your examples prove your thesis
It introduces the paragraph
Carhes the reader's attention
A quote from the story
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
It's the first part you write
Introduction then hook
After introduction and thesis and the examples
Which if these would be a good hook?
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Cuddlely and cute..
I love dogs.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5- more
What is introduction?
Tells you what the paragraph is going to be about.
Sums up the whole paragraph.
Proves your thesis.
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you wrote it?
After thesis
It's the last thing you write
After the hook
Which of these would be a good introduction?
The writer used the word 'fabulous' to describe the girl's voice.
Dogs are cute.
Descriptive language is used when the writer wants to describe somethinh very clearly.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What is thesis?
It tells you what the paragraph is about.
It probev the point.
It tells a fact.
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
It's the first thing you write
After introduction
It's the last thing you write
Which if these would be a good thesis.
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Soft and yummy
I love dogs.
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What are examples?
They are used to introduce the paragraph
They are used to sum uo the paragraph
It's used to prove your thesis
Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End
When do you write it?
After introduction and thesis
At the end
It's the first thing you write.
Which of these would be good examples?
Dogs are dtaying home with their owners and the cats are always away.
I love cats
Dogs are better than cats
How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more
What is explaniation?
It proves that your examples prove your thesis
Tuesday, 6 October 2015
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/thunderer/article4573648.ece
http://www.thesundaytimes.co.uk/sto/news/focus/article1603542.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/columnists/article4536066.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/uk/article4515049.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/world/europe/article4570319.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/letters/article4541393.ece
http://www.thesundaytimes.co.uk/sto/news/focus/article1603542.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/columnists/article4536066.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/uk/article4515049.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/world/europe/article4570319.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/letters/article4541393.ece
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