Tuesday, 8 December 2015

10 things i hate about you

I hate the way you talk to me 
And the way you cut your hair 
I hate the way you drive my car 
I hate it when you stare 

I hate your big dumb combat boots 
And the way you read my mind 
I hate you so much that it makes me sick 
It even makes me rhyme 

I hate the way you're always right 
I hate it when you lie 
I hate it when you make me laugh 
Even worse when you make me cry 

I hate the way you're not around 
And the fact that you didn't call 
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you 
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all

I hate the way you're not around. In poems, rhyming is not the only thing that matters. You also have to make sure that the meter and the rhythm is on point to make it good and to get and keep the reader's attention. In this poem the writer usually uses 3x4 I ams then breaks it with 1x3 I Ams.
For exmple here;
 "I hate the way you talk to me -4 I am
And the way you cut your hair -4 I am
I hate the way you drive my car- 4 I am
I hate it when you stare "-3 I am
So here it uses keeps it the same for 3 times then at the end of the paragraph it breaks the rhythm. This is good because it makes a change and makes it more dramatic and more catchy. The meter helps make the message more powerful.


I hate the way you're not around 
And the fact that you didn't call 
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you 

Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all.
In a poem the way you say it is also and important thing so you have to make sure that the you say it with the right tone. Changing the tone also makes it more interesting because if you keep it the same then it becomes boring. In this poem the tone first angry then it becomes sad and she strats crying. ''
I hate the way you talk to me'':So first she list things she hates about the person who she is talking about and her tone is angry but then it becomes sad and the end she starts crying and she admits that she doesn"t hate him ''
But mostly I hate the way I don't hate you 
Not even close, not even a little bit, not even at all''









Tuesday, 1 December 2015

10 things i hate about you
-tone
-meter
-setting

Sunday, 8 November 2015

What is hook?

It introduces the paragraph
Carhes the reader's attention
A quote from the story

Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End

When do you write it?
It's the first part you write
Introduction then hook
After introduction and thesis and the examples

Which if these would be a good hook?
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Cuddlely and cute..
I love dogs.

How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5- more



What is introduction?
Tells you what the paragraph is going to be about.
Sums up the whole paragraph.
Proves your thesis.

Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End

When do you wrote it?
After thesis
It's the last thing you write
After the hook

Which of these would be a good introduction?
The writer used the word 'fabulous' to describe the girl's voice.
Dogs are cute.
Descriptive language is used when the writer wants to describe somethinh very clearly.

How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more


What is thesis?
It tells you what the paragraph is about.
It probev the point.
It tells a fact.

Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End

When do you write it?
It's the first thing you write
After introduction
It's the last thing you write

Which if these would be a good thesis.
Dogs are cuter than cats.
Soft and yummy
I love dogs.

How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more

What are examples?
They are used to introduce the paragraph
They are used to sum uo the paragraph
It's used to prove your thesis

Where does it go?
Beginning
Middle
End

When do you write it?
After introduction and thesis
At the end
It's the first thing you write.

Which of these would be good examples?
Dogs are dtaying home with their owners and the cats are always away.
I love cats
Dogs are better than cats

How many sentences do you have to write for it?
1-2
3-4
5-more

What is explaniation?
It proves that your examples prove your thesis





Tuesday, 6 October 2015

http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/thunderer/article4573648.ece

http://www.thesundaytimes.co.uk/sto/news/focus/article1603542.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/columnists/article4536066.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/uk/article4515049.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/news/world/europe/article4570319.ece
http://www.thetimes.co.uk/tto/opinion/letters/article4541393.ece
The Times is using both terms but refugees occurs most often.

Thursday, 1 October 2015

A big group of people is trying to walk their way to a better life.
The migration crisis is a victim and an economic diaspora becausen they are the victims of the civil war and they are trying to get away from it.
 It is a victim diaspora because they are 'forced' to leave otherwise they would probably die, so they don't really have the chose to stay. Because the civil war is happening in their country, lots of people are travelling to europe. They think that if they move they'll have a better life but actually lots of people are suffering because of no food, no clothes, no money and no shelter. They are poor, amd it's not fair.

Tuesday, 29 September 2015

The hungarian diaspora.
Counrty seperated, people escaping, and barely any hungarians are left after the diaspora.
The hungarian diaspora was an Imperial diaspora where most of the hungarians went to another country to work for the emipre, hoping for a better life.
In 1956, durimg the hungarian revolution, most
of the hungarian people moved to germany to work. They were told that they are getting houses and a better life. The emigration happened because Hungary joined the Austrian-Hungarian empire.
But there are two groups of diasporas; the first one was the emigration and in the second one, people were autochthonous to their homeland, and live outside hungary since the border changes in 1920 because if the treaty of trinanon. And also most people who lived at hungary, were not even hungarians.
Mainly, the hungariam diaspora beling to the imperial diaspora because lots of hungarians moved to Germany ir other countries.
I'm doing Jewish diaspora.

Thursday, 24 September 2015


What is the definition of diaspora?

: a group of people who live outside the area in which they had lived for a long time or in which their ancestors lived
a  :  the movement, migration, or scattering of a people away from an established or ancestral homeland <the black diaspora to northern cities>
b  :  people settled far from their ancestral homelands <African diaspora>
c  :  the place where these people live

diaspora is a large group of people with a similar heritage or homeland who have since moved out to places all over the world.
The term diaspora comes from an ancient Greek word meaning "to scatter about." And that's exactly what the people of a diaspora do — they scatter from their homeland to places across the globe, spreading their culture as they go. The Bible refers to the Diaspora of Jews exiled from Israel by the Babylonians. But the word is now also used more generally to describe any large migration of refugees, language, or culture.

Definitions of diaspora
1

nthe dispersion or spreading of something that was originally localized (as a people or language or culture)





Diaspora is a big group of people, coming from the same place, leavimg their country and traveling to places all around the world.

Wednesday, 23 September 2015

Migrants everywhere!
Syrians are frantically heading towards Hungary to escape from their country to get to Germany.

861 migrates are coming from Syria to Hungary.
 They are traveling here because they want to get to Germany. Unfortunately, to get to Germany they have to have passports to get through the borders, otherwise the Hungarian government won't let them through. They want to take the migrants to a special camp where they have something to eat and to drink and a place to sleep. This is actually pretty nice of them because they want to help the migrants but I think they should just let them through and let them go where they want to go because they already worked really hard to get here.
They want to go to Germany because they said that they would help the migrants and take care of them. This is actually a misunderstanding.
Hungary should let the migrants go out of our country because they are very desperate to escape and to make a better life and a better future. And also, if we let them go then the whole country wouldn't be full of them.

Tuesday, 22 September 2015

Floodlight or spotlight?

Half of the world is into sports and could watch it all day.
The other half is more artistic and into dancing and drama.

I think to be in the spotlight is better than playing under the floodlight.

For example, I don't really get why people have to shout as loud that the roof might fall down while they are watching the sports in the T.V. I understand that they want to win but screaming is just not going to help.
People who go to the Opera or just to a theater, are much quiter because they are just sitting nicely and enjoying the show. And not only that but also it's much nicer to be under the spotlight because the only noise you can hear is the clapping audience, nothing else so you can concentrate on their roles. But for the people who are playing matches it's harder because people are screaming and you can't really concentrate. So this is a reason why I prefer spotlight instead of floodlight.

No offense, but usually people who are in the sport teams are the popular ones and sometimes they are a bit full of them self.

I'm into spotlight because i really enjoy watching the shows. Also dancing under it is a beautiful feeling. You feel like you are free and you don't have to worry about anything. I'm not
saying that other sports are bad but i'm not that kind of person who's into watching or playing them.
Every people is different. Football is to a footballer as a dance shoe is to a dancer , I would say.